TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 06 [tl][timed][edit+QC]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 06 [WR]

31
I see.
Huh.
{I don't like the phrasing here. I'll let it be seperated though, no problem with that.}


33
"Street-corner Marshmallow Encounters."{I think she says Machikado Marshmellow Houmongi}
"Street-corner Marshmallow Interviews" 
{I believe it's Houmonki, which is interview according to Japanese dictionaries.}
{you don't use periods in a title, might want to change other titles accordingly}

35
Tsutsukakshi, please stop!
Tsutsukakushi, please forgive me!
{Going for the literal translation}

38
"Marshmallow Encounters, Volume 3."
"Marshmallow Interviews, Volume 3."
{I can't see anything on the manga scanlations unfortunately}

62
{\i1}W-Why is she moaning like that?{\i0}
{\i1}W-Why is she moaning like that every time?{\i0}
{adding ichiichi}

65
attract wishes and make them true, {tlc - HS: It grants wishes and brings prosperity...}
granting wishes and bringing prosperity,
{han'ei wo motarasu = bringing prosperity}

66
but it also occasionally curses people. {tlc - HS: But it's also said that it brings the curse of a short life.}
but it can also bring the curse of a short life.
{tanmei no tatari = short life curse, so people won't live long}

68
{\i1}but I'm sure she did mention "attract wishes"{\fscx250}-{\fscx100}
{\i1}but I'm sure she did mention "granting wishes"{\fscx250}-{\fscx100}
{you've seen this cat before}

87
This isn't over yet. {tlc - she calls him white fluid? refer line 78. that might also need tlc.}
This isn't over yet, White Fluid.
{duh, she's just calling him semen, what a lovely nickname}
{perhaps "Remember this" for literal meaning}

91
He's always talking about all kinds of stuff.
He's always blabbering about all kinds of stuff.
{in the sense that nobody's listening}

112
We agree on everything from the first to the tenth.
We agree on every single definition without exception.
{ichi kara juu made is a proverb, he doesn't mention 10 things}

113
So, you'll approve of my plan to kill your little brother by wringing his neck?
So, you'll approve of my plan to strangle your little brother to death?
{kubirikorosu is a term}

115
Huh? Kill?!
Huh? To death?!
{This fits better in literal way I guess}

138
I'll hold out on wringing his neck until then.
I'll hold out on strangling him until then.
{if the above applied, for consistency}

140
{\i1}This cat statue attracts wishes.{\i0}
{\i1}This cat statue grants wishes.{\i0}
{consistency}

158
Seriously?! You want me to explain?!
From the beginning? Don't get me started!
{this is the literal definition}

188
You don't always get what you wish for, though.
I don't know if there's something to it, though.
{or something like, "I don't know when it actually grants wishes, though."}

230
Please wait, flat-chested girl.
Please wait, young girl.
{I think I'm hearing o-jo-u-sa-n}

239
A y-yoko-yokozuna.
{might need a TLC note like this} == Highest rank in sumo wrestling}

285
I'm like a new building with a great security system. Top quality! {tlc}
I'm like a new building blessed with a superior quality security system. 
{Taking the double line out of this one}

292
That's sly like a black kite that steals fatty meat! {tlc}
That's sly, stealing him away from me.
{http://m.romajidesu.com/kanji/%E6%8E%BB%E3%81%A3%E6%94%AB%E3%81%86%E6%8E%BB%E3%81%A3%E3%81%95%E3%82%89%E3%81%86%E6%8E%BB%E6%94%AB%E3%81%86}
{lit. It's unfair to steal the things I deserve}
{aburaage is in this case tofu, which actually gets referenced in line 311}

298
A pet! He's my pet, and mine alone!
A pet! He's my personal pet!
{like she owns him, not as in hogging him}

327
I think that's certain. {dat oxymoronic sentence}
I think that's the case.
{a more liberal version}

369
Tsukiko-chan is more honorable than you think, King-sama. {tlc - more honourable correct? HS has 'resilient'.}
Tsukiko-chan is more resilient than you think, King-sama. 
{mimochi ga katai is closer to the definition as stated by CR}

376
It'll probably take a lot of time before we meet again.
It'll probably take a lot of time before we can be together again.
{this works better in context}